I love it when this happens...
Mar. 28th, 2007 04:52 pmSo, this was in my inbox when I got home. I was kinda worried at first because it's been years since I wrote Twin Spirits, and anyone who is still reviewing it at this point is probably doing it to tell me I'm certifiable. Apparently not. What a nice surprise.
Youhou, all is well that ended well!
I have to say I wasn't really convinced by your addition of two twin sisters in
the Peredhil family at the beginning but soon enough (let's say along the first
half of the first chapter ^^)I found the idea quite endearing, plausible and
very well written so I continued non-stop until this last chapter.
A really good story then, my only doubts really being Arwen's character (I seem
to have some difficulty to figure her in the tree for exemple) but after all why
not (I mean you're surely right, she can't be the lady at all times now, can
she?)and a tiny detail that just peskered me a little: Ereinion' hair colour (I
think I remember that as a Noldor he should have black hair), but it is as you
can see a really tinny detail that I can't even begin to comprehend why it calls
my attention.
On a more happy note I was really pleased you thought of pairing Dune and
Legolas in such a manner. It was quite endearing seeing them fall for each other
so young and yet having to wait for so long (yes, there is some disadvantage to
be immortal ^^).
There I shall stop rambling and thank you for this story while wishing you a
good day.
Evohe!
Now these are the reviews that I like to get. They make me continue writing. It was also a nice happy moment after four hours at work with the liason from head office who I absolutely can't stand.
Youhou, all is well that ended well!
I have to say I wasn't really convinced by your addition of two twin sisters in
the Peredhil family at the beginning but soon enough (let's say along the first
half of the first chapter ^^)I found the idea quite endearing, plausible and
very well written so I continued non-stop until this last chapter.
A really good story then, my only doubts really being Arwen's character (I seem
to have some difficulty to figure her in the tree for exemple) but after all why
not (I mean you're surely right, she can't be the lady at all times now, can
she?)and a tiny detail that just peskered me a little: Ereinion' hair colour (I
think I remember that as a Noldor he should have black hair), but it is as you
can see a really tinny detail that I can't even begin to comprehend why it calls
my attention.
On a more happy note I was really pleased you thought of pairing Dune and
Legolas in such a manner. It was quite endearing seeing them fall for each other
so young and yet having to wait for so long (yes, there is some disadvantage to
be immortal ^^).
There I shall stop rambling and thank you for this story while wishing you a
good day.
Evohe!
Now these are the reviews that I like to get. They make me continue writing. It was also a nice happy moment after four hours at work with the liason from head office who I absolutely can't stand.